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• The personality section is lacking regarding who, precisely, Cassandra is. It mentions that she is a paradox but does little to explain what that may mean. It mentions her friends and the development of a sense of humor, but with no context to really give a picture of what makes Cassandra tick. It doesn't elaborate on how she may feel about the prejudices her kind face, how she handles her purpose, or what drives her. I'd like to see a personality section that expounds upon these things.